Greetings and Coming HomeFrom Mumbai, India
Hey Family,
I am done with my trip around almost the whole world. My final stop is Mumbai. Well, here I am, and wow... I am speechless. The water is calming, the sunsets are breath taking, and there are A LOT of people. Did you know that Mumbai holds more or less than 14 million people!?! Me either. How to fit so many people in one country? Ha, that's the question to ask right. Well, people in Mumbai exchange many things in a trade to get what they need. Also, another Did you know?, Did you know that Mumbai was made up of two parts, Mumbai City and Mumbai Suburban District. I didn't know that but wondered why they are like this... I don't want to leave. You all know how much I love the ocean. Well the waters here are just gorgeous. I cant stop looking at this Island city's lovely waters. I wish i could take some with me, but then my bag would get wet. So, the water is good in the ocean. Any more questions? Ask when I get home! I will see you in 2 weeks!
Love, Ali <3
Hi Alicia,
ReplyDeleteYour virtual postcards look great. They really meet the requirement to provide a convincing "lively impression" of the places you are visiting. It does look like the research topic (to be clearly identified and discussed for each place) kind of got lost along the way, with more general travel facts/cultural stuff provided instead -- good, but a little off so a point off each place, resulting in 54/60, with full credit 36/36 for well-organized links to sources. Nice work!